Tempest的七七八八
到后面就是 No Zuo No Die 的典型例证……
变成翻译了= =
2014-04-18 15:12:46 TC
Tempest更新21章了哦也
2014-04-18 15:12:56 TC
晚上回家路上有东西看了
2014-04-18 15:13:31 浮桥
/抠鼻
2014-04-23 09:52:38 TC
吓到我了。。。Tempest的作者是男的= =
fanfiction的简介中强调自己是男的，tumblr上面写了自己18岁……
18岁的小男生写的，我被震惊了= =
2014-04-23 10:01:12 浮桥
等等，tumblr这个文和tempest是同时的文吗？
2014-04-23 10:02:47 TC
tumblr是轻博客，是写了Tempest后注册了帐号当博客用的。无论是fanfic还是tumblr都是新注册用户
fanfic是去年12月注册，Tempest是那时候开始更的，tumblr是之后才开的帐号
2014-04-23 10:05:22 浮桥
不过这样一来，就可以理解为什么他更关注情节了
2014-04-23 10:05:39 TC
很多笔墨在刻画十三个王子的个性
对Elsa来说就是“我该信任谁”的头疼问题
2014-04-23 10:06:57 浮桥
那还真是够头疼的
为什么会生十三个王子啊
2014-04-23 10:07:17 TC
南艾尔斯不就是十三子么
2014-04-23 10:07:43 浮桥
我知道，我是好奇为什么这样设定……
2014-04-23 10:07:59 TC
十三是个不吉利的数字，而且对第十三阿哥来说是绝望的排名= =
2014-04-23 10:09:15 浮桥
原来如此
2014-04-23 15:17:25 TC
fanfic上按照收藏排位，Tempest好像是第五，
其实Tempest我一开始看了设定也没看下去，说E有阴暗面，跟A不是姐妹
后来车上无聊才看的= =
话说前五好像只有Tempest不是M级的。。。
2014-04-23 15:25:58 浮桥
…………
东西方一样啊
2014-04-24 14:51:48 TC
刚才同事的来踢狗又响了
2014-04-24 14:52:32 浮桥
……
2014-04-24 15:38:33 TC
Tempest里面其他王子都看出来安娜对艾莎有意思，或者她俩有一腿；就是安娜自己一直没意识到，艾莎也一直没考虑过这种事情
有个王子还暗示安娜被艾莎当xxx在圈养，说安娜辛苦了要忍受那种事情
2014-04-24 15:39:52 浮桥
她们不认同么？
2014-04-24 15:40:45 TC
这个的话安娜很清楚是这个王子误会艾沙了吧，她说没有的事
后来艾沙和安娜接吻了，然后艾沙说好吧，如果让那个王子知道了他还是什么反应。。。
人家这么说她们的时候这两只确实清白
2014-04-24 15:42:31 浮桥
后来就不清白了……
2014-04-24 15:42:41 TC
接吻而已，没干别的
2014-04-24 15:42:57 浮桥
接吻就坐实了啊
2014-04-24 15:43:10 TC
但就算这样，其他王子问的时候她们也承认她们在一起了
2014-04-24 15:43:43 浮桥
承认了后矛盾有变得激化吗？
2014-04-24 15:43:54 TC
安娜是被汉斯提示之后意识到自己的感情，然后去向艾莎表白了。。。
那似乎貌似已经十五十六章了= =
2014-04-24 15:45:27 浮桥
我记得每章大概4K5吧
从字数来说，进展还是很快的
2014-04-24 15:47:12 TC
然后艾沙也没说爱她，她说自己一直就想否认，想让安娜离开，但她没法否定自己想要依靠她
2014-04-24 15:48:15 TC
十几章里已经发生够多的事情了
2014-04-24 15:48:51 浮桥
我是说字数……
2014-04-25 09:45:01 TC
自己看和想着翻译去看效果真不一样。。。。
2014-04-25 09:45:31 浮桥
果然么……
什么感觉
2014-04-25 09:45:57 TC
要想遣词造句会看得更深入啊。。。
原文的用词你也会特别留意到
就这么看的话就过去了
就像魁北克法语版，看就这么看过去了，翻译的时候才发现
比如三个puis一人一句，还有女王回汉斯那句话的学问
2014-04-25 09:47:44 浮桥
从翻译的角度来看，那个文给你的感觉如何？
2014-04-25 09:48:00 TC
我就看了一点点啊
好难翻。。。
用语很简练就难翻了。。。。
2014-04-25 09:48:32 浮桥
他用语很简练啊
2014-04-25 09:48:47 TC
表白那段确实很简练啊
2014-04-25 10:00:58 TC
"He told me to kill you, twice now."
Such silence fell over them both that Anna was sure the only sound came from her breathing, and even then it felt as though they had stepped through to an empty void. She didn’t need to ask to know who. Elsa would only take orders from one person. Anna asked simply, "Why?"
"Because you are a distraction," Elsa answered.
"Am I?"
"Yes."
"What else did he say?" Anna asked.
"He said that you would destroy everything, that you would ruin me."
"Have I?"
"Yes," Elsa answered, urgently. "You’ve shattered me all over again, utterly and completely. Whatever peace I had found, I’ve lost because of you."
看得懂吗
2014-04-25 10:05:43 浮桥
勉强
谁跟艾莎说要杀了安娜的？
2014-04-25 10:06:52 TC
老国王
觉得翻译好难啊
字数越少越要咬文嚼字
2014-04-25 10:19:48 浮桥
果然我英语烂
不能准确理解第二段文字
翻译就更不要想了
2014-04-25 10:21:45 TC
“他叫我杀了你，已经两次了。”
两个人都沉默了，安娜可以确定，两人的死寂中唯一的声音来自她自己的呼吸。即便如此，她们还是踏入了空洞的虚无。她不需要询问对方是谁，因为艾莎只听从一个人的命令。她只是问：“为什么？”
“因为你让我分心。”
“我有吗？”
“有。”
“他还说了什么？”安娜问。
“他说你会毁了一切，你会毁掉我。”
“我会吗？”
“会。”艾莎急切地回答道，“你已经让我又一次心烦意乱，彻底地，完全地四分五裂，我所寻获的安宁，已经因为你而失去了。”
2014-04-25 10:23:04 浮桥
原来我理解错了最后一句话……
2014-04-25 10:23:13 TC
哪句
2014-04-25 10:23:21 浮桥
我所寻获的安宁，已经因为你而失去了。
我的理解正好相反= =
2014-04-25 10:23:45 TC
鄙视
2014-04-25 10:23:51 浮桥
想想也是啊，前面已经说过安娜让艾莎心烦意乱了，怎么可能感到安宁
2014-04-25 10:26:50 TC
Anna raised her chin as though baring her neck and awaiting her fate, but she did so in challenge and trust. "Then are you going to kill me?"
安娜抬起下巴露出脖子，就像在迎接自己的命运，但她这么做却是基于挑战和信任：“你会杀了我吗？”
2014-04-25 10:33:56 TC
"I won’t," Elsa said. Anna felt her heart skip a beat, this time of her own accord, at the vehemence in Elsa’s tone. "No matter what anyone says, I won’t kill you."
"You said it yourself that you enjoy it," Anna said. "Why am I any different?"
"It’s not – I don’t…" Elsa swallowed. "You’re Anna."
"Is that all you’re going to say?"
"What do you want me to say?"
Anna shook her head. "It’s not that I want you to say something in particular. I just want you to say what you feel, because I know you still can. Or if you can’t say it out loud, at least admit it to yourself."
"Why–?"
这些看得懂吧
2014-04-25 10:35:05 浮桥
嗯
2014-04-25 10:35:18 TC
"I’m not going to tell you one thing and do another. I’m going to do what my heart tells me, and say what I need to say." Anna closed her eyes and took a deep breath. "I – I love you." Elsa didn’t respond, but Anna had expected as much so she put on a brave smile. "Maybe I’m being stupid, but I do. I’m sorry if I misunderstood your feelings. I thought you…" Anna laughed. "Never mind."
2014-04-25 10:37:43 浮桥
这段还行，大意能看懂
2014-04-25 10:38:30 TC
She had done all that she could for Elsa, and now it was time for her to make her own decisions. Anna began to walk away.
Until she felt Elsa wrapping her arms around her, pulling her back.
"Why do you have to force me?" Elsa asked, and for the first time her voice shook. "I-I’ve tried so hard to deny it. I want so much to just let you go, I don’t want to ever hurt you. Ever since the day I met you, my heart…I couldn’t push it away or hide from it anymore. Because of you, I…" Elsa loosened her hold.
2014-04-25 10:48:40 浮桥
Elsa loosened her hold
什么意思？
2014-04-25 10:50:22 TC
hold就是保持住（冷静、端庄、形象之类）
2014-04-25 10:51:04 浮桥
哦……
看来简单的词也要查了= =
2014-04-25 10:51:39 TC
……
其实这种词可以意会的吧
2014-04-25 10:52:03 浮桥
不能
2014-04-25 10:52:08 TC
。。。。鄙视你
2014-04-25 10:53:32 浮桥
你尽管鄙视吧~
2014-04-25 11:03:28 TC
She had fought to look away before. It was impossible now. Anna turned to look at Elsa and saw tears welling in her red-rimmed eyes, sliding down her face, but Elsa made no sound, no move to wipe them away. Whatever defenses she had built up were gone, leaving her gaze vulnerable but gentler, softer. Anna silently brushed Elsa’s tears away, thumb gently tracing over soft skin.
她起初还挣扎着看向别处，但现在已经不可能了。安娜回过头，看到泪水从艾莎发红的眼圈滚落。但艾莎没有发出任何声音，她没有动，没有去擦拭。她所构建的防御消失了，她看上去脆弱而温和。安娜默默地擦去艾莎的眼泪，拇指轻轻地在这温润的皮肤上摩挲。
"All I want is to lean on you. I was taught never to rely on anyone. I was told that dependency makes me weak. But…" Elsa smiled through her tears. "But when I see you, I become not like myself. No matter what I do, I just can’t pretend anymore, I don’t know who I am, I–"
“我所想要的一切就是依靠着你。我一直被教导不要去依赖别人，依赖会让我软弱，但是……”艾莎含着眼泪笑了，“但我看到你，我就变得不再是我自己。不管我做什么，我都没法再伪装下去，我已经不知道我是谁，我……”
Anna pulled Elsa into an embrace. Elsa held on and leaned her forehead against her shoulder, finally breaking down into quiet sobs. Anna could feel her entire body trembling against her and held on tighter.
安娜将艾莎拥入怀中。艾莎抱住她，前额抵着她的肩膀，终于放任自己抽泣起来。安娜感觉到倚着她的身躯在颤抖，于是更紧地抱住了她。
"It’s okay. You don’t have to say anymore," Anna murmured. "No matter what happens…"
“没事的，你不用再说下去。”安娜轻声说道，“不管发生了什么事……”
You’re still my Elsa.
你都还是我的艾莎。
2014-04-25 11:04:42 TC
第十五章就这么完了，告别以拥抱结束。。。。。
告白。。。
2014-04-25 11:06:54 浮桥
我直接看汉字了
2014-04-25 11:07:37 TC
鄙视
2014-04-25 11:07:57 TC
汉字表述比原文差
2014-04-25 11:08:18 浮桥
我看原文也感觉不出来啊
光辨认意思就很费劲了
2014-04-25 11:22:40 TC
第十六章kiss
"This reminds me a little of Arendelle," Anna said suddenly. "I would beg Pappa to have chocolate, and he’d always end up letting me but he just had to pretend otherwise first. Bad habits, he said."
“这让我有点儿想起阿伦戴尔了。”安娜忽然说，“我会央求爸爸给我点巧克力，而他最后总是会给我，但一开始又总是装作不行。他也说我这是坏习惯。”
Elsa stilled again, but the sensation was not half as enjoyable this time. She felt dread.
艾莎又定住了。但这一回的感受一点都不愉快，她感到害怕。
"…Do you miss home?"
“……你想家吗？”
"Well, yeah, of course," Anna shrugged.
“啊，是的，当然了。”安娜耸耸肩。
"If you want…" Elsa said slowly, wondering about the phantom pang where her heart had been – only her imagination, most likely, because the alternative was impossible – but she had to say it anyway. It was only right. "You can go home."
“如果你想……”艾莎慢慢说着，心脏的位置传来一阵幻痛——更可能只是自己的想象出来的，毕竟心脏事实上已经不在那里——但无论如何她得说下去，必须说下去，“你可以回家。”
Heavy silence stretched on as Anna blinked, but she never took her eyes off Elsa. "Go home?" Anna repeated, like Elsa had spoken in a foreign language. "Did you just tell me to go home?"
安娜眨了眨眼，沉重的寂静弥漫开来。但安娜的视线并未离开艾莎。“回家？”安娜重复着，似乎艾莎说的是外语，“你刚才说要我回家？”
"There’s no reason for me to hold you here." Elsa averted her eyes. It was the last thing she wanted. It was only fate that Anna leaving was also the best thing. "I know that you miss Arendelle, and your father. It was wrong for me to take you away from your home and family, but I can fix all this–"
“我没有任何理由把你留在这里。”艾莎避开了她的视线。让安娜离开，是她最不情愿的事情，但又是最好的选择，也是安娜唯一的命运。“我知道你想念阿伦戴尔，还有你的父亲。我把你从你的国家和家庭带走是错误的，但我可以纠正——”
"You’re an idiot."
“你是个笨蛋。”
Elsa’s head snapped up, and she was greeted by Anna looking utterly furious. "I-I don’t understand. It’s for the best."
艾莎猛地抬头，但迎接她的是安娜暴怒的脸。“我、我不明白，这样不是最好的吗。”
"You’re right, I thought it was the cruelest thing possible when you took me away," Anna said, and Elsa nodded because she knew – only someone as depraved as she was could think of something like that – but Anna wasn’t finished. "But you can’t just expect me to just leave after everything that’s happened!"
“你说得对，你把我带走的时候，我认为这是最残酷的事情。”安娜这么说着，而艾莎点着头。她知道只有像她这么卑鄙的人才会想到做这种事情——但安娜并没有说完。“但你别想让我在发生这么多事情后一走了之！”
"Everything will go back to normal," Elsa said. "Nothing has changed. My offer still stands; I will continue to give Arendelle leniency. You can be home with your father, safe and at peace, and I will–"
“一切都会回到从前。”艾莎说，“什么都不会变，我的承诺依然成立，阿伦戴尔会享受到宽待。你可以回家和你的父亲团聚，回到安全宁静的生活。而我——”
"Be alone?" Anna challenged. Elsa looked away, unwilling to be swayed, but to her shock Anna took her hand and pressed it against her chest. She could feel the beating of her heart. Anna was there, a weak, pleading smile on her face. "Everything’s changed, I can feel it. I know you don’t want me to leave."
“又是孤身一人？”安娜回嘴。艾莎看向了别处，不愿意展露自己的动摇。但让她震惊的是，安娜抓住了她的手，放到了自己胸口。她能感觉到她的心跳。安娜在那里，脸上挂着恳求的微笑，“一切都已经不同了，我能感觉得到。我知道你不想我离开。”
"…The only thing I’m afraid of is you leaving me," Elsa admitted. Just the thought of it was unbearable. Pushing Anna away was blotting out the little light she had left, but what else could she do? "But I won’t stop you if you want to go home."
“我唯一害怕的事情就是你离开我，”艾莎承认道。即使只是想到这个，都让她无法忍受。推开安娜是将她生命中仅有的阳光抹除，但除此之外她还能怎么办？“但如果你想回家，我不会阻止你。”
"Everything I said last night, I meant it," Anna said. "It’s my choice, I want to stay. Because…you’re here."
“我昨晚所说的一切，都是认真的。”安娜说，“那就是我的选择，我要留下。因为……你在这里。”
2014-04-25 11:54:10 TC
还要两段才kiss。。。我要疯掉了，明明选了很接近的地方开始翻译的却还是那么多前奏。。。。
2014-04-25 11:55:37 浮桥
你不是享受这个前奏才喜欢这个文的么！
2014-04-25 12:11:35 TC
Once more, Elsa felt the surge of emotion across the link of their hearts. It was so sinfully pleasurable it was almost painful; Elsa could feel everything Anna felt like a wave of liquid warmth flooding her veins. The intimacy of having Anna superimposed over her senses overpowered even the perpetual chill of her magic. Understanding. Acceptance. Love. Elsa closed her eyes and relished the feeling of completion.
再一次的，艾莎感觉到汹涌的情感从两人心脏的纽带纵横。这罪恶的愉悦感甚至都要沾染上疼痛，艾莎感觉到安娜所感受到的一切，如同一股暖流在血管中奔腾。安娜所叠加在她自身感觉之上的亲昵感受，甚至强过她一直以来所掌控的冰雪魔法的威力。理解，接受，爱。艾莎闭上双眼，任由这感受在体内释放。
It felt like the most natural thing in the world when Anna pressed her lips to hers.
就像是这世上再自然不过的事情，安娜用双唇覆上了她的唇。
2014-04-25 12:14:18 TC
第一段的翻译有点问题，另外心脏纽带是艾沙为了老国王把自己心挖出来献祭成了圣骨盒，安娜去碰的时候有一部分射入了她的心脏
那好像是第十章的事情，这俩真慢热
2014-04-25 12:30:51 TC
It was a spur of the moment thing.
这是一时冲动。
Anna saw Elsa close her eyes and the impulse came to her because now might be the best time, now or never because she might never again dare to try.
安娜看到艾莎闭上眼，一股冲动在内心涌动，这是最好的时机，一去不返，因为她可能再也没有胆量去尝试。
So Anna closed her eyes, leaned forward, and kissed her.
于是安娜闭上双眼，前倾身体，吻了她。
2014-04-25 12:31:33 浮桥
英语好累赘
这么简洁的文字也要加个and
2014-04-25 12:32:45 TC
然后下面其实挺搞笑的，艾沙被吓住了，所以停止了呼吸，僵硬得跟雕像似的，安娜以为她不喜欢，要撤的时候被艾沙拉住
艾沙对接吻一点概念都没有，连怎么反应都不知道
安娜还要一边教她。。。
2014-04-25 12:37:51 浮桥
有惨到这种地步吗
这个不是本能吗
2014-04-25 12:38:28 TC
她没有心，理论上也不该有感觉
2014-04-25 12:39:13 浮桥
原来如此
2014-04-25 12:41:46 TC
2014-04-25 12:42:00 TC
第二第三段还好吧
2014-04-25 12:45:40 浮桥
确实挺喜感的……
2014-04-25 12:47:15 TC
在安娜的抱怨下艾沙回应了，然后安娜发现她干的很好。。。
2014-04-25 14:20:56 TC
Tempest的亲密戏真是写得挺好玩的。。。
安娜遇上这么不解风情的女友够倒霉
后面有一段公主被女王搞得欲火焚身[emoji]
2014-04-25 17:15:00 浮桥
……
然后X冷淡女王又撤了么
2014-04-25 17:15:19 TC
女王好无辜但硬是把公主的欲火熄灭了。。。
女王对于给公主做新的冰雪长裙更感兴趣
2014-04-25 17:19:13 浮桥
哦，真是不解风情
变成翻译了= =
2014-04-18 15:12:46 TC
Tempest更新21章了哦也
2014-04-18 15:12:56 TC
晚上回家路上有东西看了
2014-04-18 15:13:31 浮桥
/抠鼻
2014-04-23 09:52:38 TC
吓到我了。。。Tempest的作者是男的= =
fanfiction的简介中强调自己是男的，tumblr上面写了自己18岁……
18岁的小男生写的，我被震惊了= =
2014-04-23 10:01:12 浮桥
等等，tumblr这个文和tempest是同时的文吗？
2014-04-23 10:02:47 TC
tumblr是轻博客，是写了Tempest后注册了帐号当博客用的。无论是fanfic还是tumblr都是新注册用户
fanfic是去年12月注册，Tempest是那时候开始更的，tumblr是之后才开的帐号
2014-04-23 10:05:22 浮桥
不过这样一来，就可以理解为什么他更关注情节了
2014-04-23 10:05:39 TC
很多笔墨在刻画十三个王子的个性
对Elsa来说就是“我该信任谁”的头疼问题
2014-04-23 10:06:57 浮桥
那还真是够头疼的
为什么会生十三个王子啊
2014-04-23 10:07:17 TC
南艾尔斯不就是十三子么
2014-04-23 10:07:43 浮桥
我知道，我是好奇为什么这样设定……
2014-04-23 10:07:59 TC
十三是个不吉利的数字，而且对第十三阿哥来说是绝望的排名= =
2014-04-23 10:09:15 浮桥
原来如此
2014-04-23 15:17:25 TC
fanfic上按照收藏排位，Tempest好像是第五，
其实Tempest我一开始看了设定也没看下去，说E有阴暗面，跟A不是姐妹
后来车上无聊才看的= =
话说前五好像只有Tempest不是M级的。。。
2014-04-23 15:25:58 浮桥
…………
东西方一样啊
2014-04-24 14:51:48 TC
刚才同事的来踢狗又响了
2014-04-24 14:52:32 浮桥
……
2014-04-24 15:38:33 TC
Tempest里面其他王子都看出来安娜对艾莎有意思，或者她俩有一腿；就是安娜自己一直没意识到，艾莎也一直没考虑过这种事情
有个王子还暗示安娜被艾莎当xxx在圈养，说安娜辛苦了要忍受那种事情
2014-04-24 15:39:52 浮桥
她们不认同么？
2014-04-24 15:40:45 TC
这个的话安娜很清楚是这个王子误会艾沙了吧，她说没有的事
后来艾沙和安娜接吻了，然后艾沙说好吧，如果让那个王子知道了他还是什么反应。。。
人家这么说她们的时候这两只确实清白
2014-04-24 15:42:31 浮桥
后来就不清白了……
2014-04-24 15:42:41 TC
接吻而已，没干别的
2014-04-24 15:42:57 浮桥
接吻就坐实了啊
2014-04-24 15:43:10 TC
但就算这样，其他王子问的时候她们也承认她们在一起了
2014-04-24 15:43:43 浮桥
承认了后矛盾有变得激化吗？
2014-04-24 15:43:54 TC
安娜是被汉斯提示之后意识到自己的感情，然后去向艾莎表白了。。。
那似乎貌似已经十五十六章了= =
2014-04-24 15:45:27 浮桥
我记得每章大概4K5吧
从字数来说，进展还是很快的
2014-04-24 15:47:12 TC
然后艾沙也没说爱她，她说自己一直就想否认，想让安娜离开，但她没法否定自己想要依靠她
2014-04-24 15:48:15 TC
十几章里已经发生够多的事情了
2014-04-24 15:48:51 浮桥
我是说字数……
2014-04-25 09:45:01 TC
自己看和想着翻译去看效果真不一样。。。。
2014-04-25 09:45:31 浮桥
果然么……
什么感觉
2014-04-25 09:45:57 TC
要想遣词造句会看得更深入啊。。。
原文的用词你也会特别留意到
就这么看的话就过去了
就像魁北克法语版，看就这么看过去了，翻译的时候才发现
比如三个puis一人一句，还有女王回汉斯那句话的学问
2014-04-25 09:47:44 浮桥
从翻译的角度来看，那个文给你的感觉如何？
2014-04-25 09:48:00 TC
我就看了一点点啊
好难翻。。。
用语很简练就难翻了。。。。
2014-04-25 09:48:32 浮桥
他用语很简练啊
2014-04-25 09:48:47 TC
表白那段确实很简练啊
2014-04-25 10:00:58 TC
"He told me to kill you, twice now."
Such silence fell over them both that Anna was sure the only sound came from her breathing, and even then it felt as though they had stepped through to an empty void. She didn’t need to ask to know who. Elsa would only take orders from one person. Anna asked simply, "Why?"
"Because you are a distraction," Elsa answered.
"Am I?"
"Yes."
"What else did he say?" Anna asked.
"He said that you would destroy everything, that you would ruin me."
"Have I?"
"Yes," Elsa answered, urgently. "You’ve shattered me all over again, utterly and completely. Whatever peace I had found, I’ve lost because of you."
看得懂吗
2014-04-25 10:05:43 浮桥
勉强
谁跟艾莎说要杀了安娜的？
2014-04-25 10:06:52 TC
老国王
觉得翻译好难啊
字数越少越要咬文嚼字
2014-04-25 10:19:48 浮桥
果然我英语烂
不能准确理解第二段文字
翻译就更不要想了
2014-04-25 10:21:45 TC
“他叫我杀了你，已经两次了。”
两个人都沉默了，安娜可以确定，两人的死寂中唯一的声音来自她自己的呼吸。即便如此，她们还是踏入了空洞的虚无。她不需要询问对方是谁，因为艾莎只听从一个人的命令。她只是问：“为什么？”
“因为你让我分心。”
“我有吗？”
“有。”
“他还说了什么？”安娜问。
“他说你会毁了一切，你会毁掉我。”
“我会吗？”
“会。”艾莎急切地回答道，“你已经让我又一次心烦意乱，彻底地，完全地四分五裂，我所寻获的安宁，已经因为你而失去了。”
2014-04-25 10:23:04 浮桥
原来我理解错了最后一句话……
2014-04-25 10:23:13 TC
哪句
2014-04-25 10:23:21 浮桥
我所寻获的安宁，已经因为你而失去了。
我的理解正好相反= =
2014-04-25 10:23:45 TC
鄙视
2014-04-25 10:23:51 浮桥
想想也是啊，前面已经说过安娜让艾莎心烦意乱了，怎么可能感到安宁
2014-04-25 10:26:50 TC
Anna raised her chin as though baring her neck and awaiting her fate, but she did so in challenge and trust. "Then are you going to kill me?"
安娜抬起下巴露出脖子，就像在迎接自己的命运，但她这么做却是基于挑战和信任：“你会杀了我吗？”
2014-04-25 10:33:56 TC
"I won’t," Elsa said. Anna felt her heart skip a beat, this time of her own accord, at the vehemence in Elsa’s tone. "No matter what anyone says, I won’t kill you."
"You said it yourself that you enjoy it," Anna said. "Why am I any different?"
"It’s not – I don’t…" Elsa swallowed. "You’re Anna."
"Is that all you’re going to say?"
"What do you want me to say?"
Anna shook her head. "It’s not that I want you to say something in particular. I just want you to say what you feel, because I know you still can. Or if you can’t say it out loud, at least admit it to yourself."
"Why–?"
这些看得懂吧
2014-04-25 10:35:05 浮桥
嗯
2014-04-25 10:35:18 TC
"I’m not going to tell you one thing and do another. I’m going to do what my heart tells me, and say what I need to say." Anna closed her eyes and took a deep breath. "I – I love you." Elsa didn’t respond, but Anna had expected as much so she put on a brave smile. "Maybe I’m being stupid, but I do. I’m sorry if I misunderstood your feelings. I thought you…" Anna laughed. "Never mind."
2014-04-25 10:37:43 浮桥
这段还行，大意能看懂
2014-04-25 10:38:30 TC
She had done all that she could for Elsa, and now it was time for her to make her own decisions. Anna began to walk away.
Until she felt Elsa wrapping her arms around her, pulling her back.
"Why do you have to force me?" Elsa asked, and for the first time her voice shook. "I-I’ve tried so hard to deny it. I want so much to just let you go, I don’t want to ever hurt you. Ever since the day I met you, my heart…I couldn’t push it away or hide from it anymore. Because of you, I…" Elsa loosened her hold.
2014-04-25 10:48:40 浮桥
Elsa loosened her hold
什么意思？
2014-04-25 10:50:22 TC
hold就是保持住（冷静、端庄、形象之类）
2014-04-25 10:51:04 浮桥
哦……
看来简单的词也要查了= =
2014-04-25 10:51:39 TC
……
其实这种词可以意会的吧
2014-04-25 10:52:03 浮桥
不能
2014-04-25 10:52:08 TC
。。。。鄙视你
2014-04-25 10:53:32 浮桥
你尽管鄙视吧~
2014-04-25 11:03:28 TC
She had fought to look away before. It was impossible now. Anna turned to look at Elsa and saw tears welling in her red-rimmed eyes, sliding down her face, but Elsa made no sound, no move to wipe them away. Whatever defenses she had built up were gone, leaving her gaze vulnerable but gentler, softer. Anna silently brushed Elsa’s tears away, thumb gently tracing over soft skin.
她起初还挣扎着看向别处，但现在已经不可能了。安娜回过头，看到泪水从艾莎发红的眼圈滚落。但艾莎没有发出任何声音，她没有动，没有去擦拭。她所构建的防御消失了，她看上去脆弱而温和。安娜默默地擦去艾莎的眼泪，拇指轻轻地在这温润的皮肤上摩挲。
"All I want is to lean on you. I was taught never to rely on anyone. I was told that dependency makes me weak. But…" Elsa smiled through her tears. "But when I see you, I become not like myself. No matter what I do, I just can’t pretend anymore, I don’t know who I am, I–"
“我所想要的一切就是依靠着你。我一直被教导不要去依赖别人，依赖会让我软弱，但是……”艾莎含着眼泪笑了，“但我看到你，我就变得不再是我自己。不管我做什么，我都没法再伪装下去，我已经不知道我是谁，我……”
Anna pulled Elsa into an embrace. Elsa held on and leaned her forehead against her shoulder, finally breaking down into quiet sobs. Anna could feel her entire body trembling against her and held on tighter.
安娜将艾莎拥入怀中。艾莎抱住她，前额抵着她的肩膀，终于放任自己抽泣起来。安娜感觉到倚着她的身躯在颤抖，于是更紧地抱住了她。
"It’s okay. You don’t have to say anymore," Anna murmured. "No matter what happens…"
“没事的，你不用再说下去。”安娜轻声说道，“不管发生了什么事……”
You’re still my Elsa.
你都还是我的艾莎。
2014-04-25 11:04:42 TC
第十五章就这么完了，告别以拥抱结束。。。。。
告白。。。
2014-04-25 11:06:54 浮桥
我直接看汉字了
2014-04-25 11:07:37 TC
鄙视
2014-04-25 11:07:57 TC
汉字表述比原文差
2014-04-25 11:08:18 浮桥
我看原文也感觉不出来啊
光辨认意思就很费劲了
2014-04-25 11:22:40 TC
第十六章kiss
"This reminds me a little of Arendelle," Anna said suddenly. "I would beg Pappa to have chocolate, and he’d always end up letting me but he just had to pretend otherwise first. Bad habits, he said."
“这让我有点儿想起阿伦戴尔了。”安娜忽然说，“我会央求爸爸给我点巧克力，而他最后总是会给我，但一开始又总是装作不行。他也说我这是坏习惯。”
Elsa stilled again, but the sensation was not half as enjoyable this time. She felt dread.
艾莎又定住了。但这一回的感受一点都不愉快，她感到害怕。
"…Do you miss home?"
“……你想家吗？”
"Well, yeah, of course," Anna shrugged.
“啊，是的，当然了。”安娜耸耸肩。
"If you want…" Elsa said slowly, wondering about the phantom pang where her heart had been – only her imagination, most likely, because the alternative was impossible – but she had to say it anyway. It was only right. "You can go home."
“如果你想……”艾莎慢慢说着，心脏的位置传来一阵幻痛——更可能只是自己的想象出来的，毕竟心脏事实上已经不在那里——但无论如何她得说下去，必须说下去，“你可以回家。”
Heavy silence stretched on as Anna blinked, but she never took her eyes off Elsa. "Go home?" Anna repeated, like Elsa had spoken in a foreign language. "Did you just tell me to go home?"
安娜眨了眨眼，沉重的寂静弥漫开来。但安娜的视线并未离开艾莎。“回家？”安娜重复着，似乎艾莎说的是外语，“你刚才说要我回家？”
"There’s no reason for me to hold you here." Elsa averted her eyes. It was the last thing she wanted. It was only fate that Anna leaving was also the best thing. "I know that you miss Arendelle, and your father. It was wrong for me to take you away from your home and family, but I can fix all this–"
“我没有任何理由把你留在这里。”艾莎避开了她的视线。让安娜离开，是她最不情愿的事情，但又是最好的选择，也是安娜唯一的命运。“我知道你想念阿伦戴尔，还有你的父亲。我把你从你的国家和家庭带走是错误的，但我可以纠正——”
"You’re an idiot."
“你是个笨蛋。”
Elsa’s head snapped up, and she was greeted by Anna looking utterly furious. "I-I don’t understand. It’s for the best."
艾莎猛地抬头，但迎接她的是安娜暴怒的脸。“我、我不明白，这样不是最好的吗。”
"You’re right, I thought it was the cruelest thing possible when you took me away," Anna said, and Elsa nodded because she knew – only someone as depraved as she was could think of something like that – but Anna wasn’t finished. "But you can’t just expect me to just leave after everything that’s happened!"
“你说得对，你把我带走的时候，我认为这是最残酷的事情。”安娜这么说着，而艾莎点着头。她知道只有像她这么卑鄙的人才会想到做这种事情——但安娜并没有说完。“但你别想让我在发生这么多事情后一走了之！”
"Everything will go back to normal," Elsa said. "Nothing has changed. My offer still stands; I will continue to give Arendelle leniency. You can be home with your father, safe and at peace, and I will–"
“一切都会回到从前。”艾莎说，“什么都不会变，我的承诺依然成立，阿伦戴尔会享受到宽待。你可以回家和你的父亲团聚，回到安全宁静的生活。而我——”
"Be alone?" Anna challenged. Elsa looked away, unwilling to be swayed, but to her shock Anna took her hand and pressed it against her chest. She could feel the beating of her heart. Anna was there, a weak, pleading smile on her face. "Everything’s changed, I can feel it. I know you don’t want me to leave."
“又是孤身一人？”安娜回嘴。艾莎看向了别处，不愿意展露自己的动摇。但让她震惊的是，安娜抓住了她的手，放到了自己胸口。她能感觉到她的心跳。安娜在那里，脸上挂着恳求的微笑，“一切都已经不同了，我能感觉得到。我知道你不想我离开。”
"…The only thing I’m afraid of is you leaving me," Elsa admitted. Just the thought of it was unbearable. Pushing Anna away was blotting out the little light she had left, but what else could she do? "But I won’t stop you if you want to go home."
“我唯一害怕的事情就是你离开我，”艾莎承认道。即使只是想到这个，都让她无法忍受。推开安娜是将她生命中仅有的阳光抹除，但除此之外她还能怎么办？“但如果你想回家，我不会阻止你。”
"Everything I said last night, I meant it," Anna said. "It’s my choice, I want to stay. Because…you’re here."
“我昨晚所说的一切，都是认真的。”安娜说，“那就是我的选择，我要留下。因为……你在这里。”
2014-04-25 11:54:10 TC
还要两段才kiss。。。我要疯掉了，明明选了很接近的地方开始翻译的却还是那么多前奏。。。。
2014-04-25 11:55:37 浮桥
你不是享受这个前奏才喜欢这个文的么！
2014-04-25 12:11:35 TC
Once more, Elsa felt the surge of emotion across the link of their hearts. It was so sinfully pleasurable it was almost painful; Elsa could feel everything Anna felt like a wave of liquid warmth flooding her veins. The intimacy of having Anna superimposed over her senses overpowered even the perpetual chill of her magic. Understanding. Acceptance. Love. Elsa closed her eyes and relished the feeling of completion.
再一次的，艾莎感觉到汹涌的情感从两人心脏的纽带纵横。这罪恶的愉悦感甚至都要沾染上疼痛，艾莎感觉到安娜所感受到的一切，如同一股暖流在血管中奔腾。安娜所叠加在她自身感觉之上的亲昵感受，甚至强过她一直以来所掌控的冰雪魔法的威力。理解，接受，爱。艾莎闭上双眼，任由这感受在体内释放。
It felt like the most natural thing in the world when Anna pressed her lips to hers.
就像是这世上再自然不过的事情，安娜用双唇覆上了她的唇。
2014-04-25 12:14:18 TC
第一段的翻译有点问题，另外心脏纽带是艾沙为了老国王把自己心挖出来献祭成了圣骨盒，安娜去碰的时候有一部分射入了她的心脏
那好像是第十章的事情，这俩真慢热
2014-04-25 12:30:51 TC
It was a spur of the moment thing.
这是一时冲动。
Anna saw Elsa close her eyes and the impulse came to her because now might be the best time, now or never because she might never again dare to try.
安娜看到艾莎闭上眼，一股冲动在内心涌动，这是最好的时机，一去不返，因为她可能再也没有胆量去尝试。
So Anna closed her eyes, leaned forward, and kissed her.
于是安娜闭上双眼，前倾身体，吻了她。
2014-04-25 12:31:33 浮桥
英语好累赘
这么简洁的文字也要加个and
2014-04-25 12:32:45 TC
然后下面其实挺搞笑的，艾沙被吓住了，所以停止了呼吸，僵硬得跟雕像似的，安娜以为她不喜欢，要撤的时候被艾沙拉住
艾沙对接吻一点概念都没有，连怎么反应都不知道
安娜还要一边教她。。。
2014-04-25 12:37:51 浮桥
有惨到这种地步吗
这个不是本能吗
2014-04-25 12:38:28 TC
她没有心，理论上也不该有感觉
2014-04-25 12:39:13 浮桥
原来如此
2014-04-25 12:41:46 TC
2014-04-25 12:42:00 TC
第二第三段还好吧
2014-04-25 12:45:40 浮桥
确实挺喜感的……
2014-04-25 12:47:15 TC
在安娜的抱怨下艾沙回应了，然后安娜发现她干的很好。。。
2014-04-25 14:20:56 TC
Tempest的亲密戏真是写得挺好玩的。。。
安娜遇上这么不解风情的女友够倒霉
后面有一段公主被女王搞得欲火焚身[emoji]
2014-04-25 17:15:00 浮桥
……
然后X冷淡女王又撤了么
2014-04-25 17:15:19 TC
女王好无辜但硬是把公主的欲火熄灭了。。。
女王对于给公主做新的冰雪长裙更感兴趣
2014-04-25 17:19:13 浮桥
哦，真是不解风情
